My tutor feedback is shown below and my comments in italics.
Overall feedback
Ian Meechan Andrea Norrington
PhotographyDigital Image and Culture Video
Student number: Assignment No.: Date:
515528 2 13/02/24
Dear IanMany thanks for the time today and it was good to catch up in person. Below is a summary of our discussion – any queries do let me know. Your work was viewed on your website: https://www.macmeechan.co.uk/
As per our recent emails, below is the feedback for Assignment 2. I understand that you have not been able to submit via OCA Learn, so I will send a copy of this report to OCA directly.
Assignment 2
Spoke about adjusting the wording on each page as not make it so obvious about the ages. Think you can simply give just the two ages.
Needs an ending – as it just stops. Think how a book or a slideshow ends. If a slideshow you could have a link to the archive at the end.
I would advise reworking this assignment as the work now could pay dividends in terms of finalising presentation methods for assignment 4/5.
I mentioned the Harry Borden book:
Survivor
I’ve shared my short video directly with you (which isn’t great!)
Found this better walkthrough here – look out how text/image and then biography have been used.
Networking – within OCA and outside – consider art networks within Australia. You don’t need to have lots but a few people that can provide feedback. It will be good to walk on that network now as their advice will be valuable for the process of working through assignment 4/5.
By establishing now, you will have good support from Level 3.
Andrea will check broken links with Dan.Update – I have emailed Dan – either he or I will contact you on this.
Assignment 3
Do submit essay as Word document or Google Doc – feedback will be written with annotation. If you can’t still access OCA Learn to submit, then email me directly.
Continue to upload the coursework exercises for all part of the course as and when you complete them.
Feedback for assignment 4 would be good to do as a video call as then we can discuss options on how you might progress/develop the work for assignment 5.
